A’tremble
Posted by Rob Kistner | Filed under Free Verse, Poetry, love, photo
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lilting golden
‘long an autumn lane
carried gentle
on the winds
the rustle of aspens
lush and hush
like the murmur
of whispered passion
from a lover’s lips
a’tremble with desire
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rob kistner © 2010
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March 13th, 2010 at 7:59 pm
loved it…especially the beautiful comparison to murmur’s of whispered passion..
and what a beautiful photo…
March 14th, 2010 at 1:16 am
dear rob ,
i won’t tell lies. i have read very little of what u’ve written -
in what little i have read , i have found elegance & grace .. & a controlled tremor
many thanks ..
March 14th, 2010 at 1:21 am
Quite exotic! Especially love the delicious sensuality of “lush and hush”!
March 14th, 2010 at 3:38 am
I love the way you’ve animated nature here. Beautiful.
March 14th, 2010 at 6:04 am
Rob–
I just found your site (thru your visit to the Virtual Tea House for OSI) and am stunned! Like my friend zoya, it seems your poetry and art is full of grace and flow. I’ll be back…
If you live in Central Oregon or visit and would like to get together for a cup of something you can email me: beth at virtualteahouse dot com
Thank you–lovely work. I read through all the poems you had posted.
March 14th, 2010 at 6:15 am
Beautifully said. The whisper of those leaves can be like a secret message from a lover. It takes a quiet soul to hear it sometimes.
March 14th, 2010 at 6:18 am
Very nice soothing poem with visual imagery to match your photo. All tied to passion. Very nice.
March 14th, 2010 at 6:59 am
twas real good imagery that u created. esp the comparison of the lips..!
March 14th, 2010 at 12:15 pm
Wow, this is so beautifully written. A perfect take on the prompt. I love Autumn and all things related. So glad I stopped by.
March 14th, 2010 at 12:22 pm
very sensual; beautifully done.
March 14th, 2010 at 2:46 pm
you have captured it beautifully, i could hear the murmur of aspens….subtle yet poignant tremble..wow!
March 14th, 2010 at 4:42 pm
beautiful pic and words!!!
March 14th, 2010 at 4:51 pm
Oh my gosh this poem is soooo gorgeous!
March 14th, 2010 at 5:35 pm
Great capture of light, and the promise of light at the end of the tunnel.
March 14th, 2010 at 9:05 pm
delicious and so wonderful
as is your photo.
ummm
March 14th, 2010 at 10:39 pm
Nice imagery…well done Rob!!!
March 15th, 2010 at 6:35 am
autumn’s promise. thanks Rob. for the memory of it.
March 15th, 2010 at 7:31 am
This was so lovely! And the photo is stunning…
March 16th, 2010 at 6:16 pm
I can feel the passion, such lovely words with photo, just exquisite. Thanks for stopping by my site too.
March 17th, 2010 at 11:11 am
Ah, yes, the murmur of the aspen - this is a lovely piece!
March 18th, 2010 at 12:37 am
Twisting gently in the soft sunny breeze not wanting to let go, not yet. The season is far too short. I want to stay. I like the view here.
March 19th, 2010 at 11:40 am
full of quiet passion, the growth of old forests. lovely!
March 20th, 2010 at 9:14 pm
A veritable Druidic meditation!
March 27th, 2010 at 7:27 pm
That I’d like to see, the trembling aspens out west! I love how you personify the A’tremble aspens as a lover’s natural desires found so naturally in nature and human nature. It not A’tremble something quite musical and mysterious, and magical.Mmm!