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Bad Weather
By Rob Kistner | June 3, 2008
Bad Weather
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you blew in like a typhoon
a hurricane of love
your kisses hot as lightning
striking from above
your passion was a tempest
I was swept up in its force
but now the winds have died
this storm has run its course
my thoughts are grey and cloudy
my eyes are steady rain
my heart’s caught in a cold front
bad weather’s bringing pain
yes, the warm winds will return
as will the clear blue skies
but my frozen heart will ever yearn
for the sun-fire of your eyes
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rob kistner © 2008
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collage above entitled: “Bad Weather” - by: rob kistner © 2008
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Topics: Image, Poetry, collage |
June 5th, 2008 at 1:30 am
Bravo! Like this a lot.
June 5th, 2008 at 1:39 am
Best kind of storm to be caught in!
a perfect ending?
June 5th, 2008 at 2:45 am
Relationships are so often a storm. Sometimes, this is best.
June 5th, 2008 at 4:54 am
I love this!
June 5th, 2008 at 5:13 am
Great pic
June 5th, 2008 at 7:32 am
I think we’ve all been caught in this kind of storm.
June 5th, 2008 at 7:59 am
Love it Rob! Passionate, yet forlorn….
June 6th, 2008 at 4:21 am
great collage and of course loved the poem. well-placed metaphor here
June 7th, 2008 at 6:30 pm
Love the pace of this and the way it rhymes and the image ‘a hurricane of love.’
June 8th, 2008 at 5:27 am
Oh, Rob, this just sings! Your rhythm is right on and the rhyme is so natural. LOVE the collage and those haunting eyes!
June 8th, 2008 at 6:45 am
this was great, very nice rhythm.
June 8th, 2008 at 8:40 am
Love this Rob! Beautiful images and metaphors!
I’m visiting from “One single Impression.” 
June 9th, 2008 at 9:28 am
“but my frozen heart will ever yearn
for the sun-fire of your eyes”
lovely way to say this