Bliss
Posted by Rob Kistner | Filed under beauty, dreams, erotic, Image, joy, love, Poetry, sensuality
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let us dare
sweet lust’s advance
to intertwine
in love’s enhance
I burn to offer
love’s special kiss
to fire your soul
in passion’s bliss
to enfold you deep
in nocturne’s hour
to taste the nectar
of your tender flower
you are the dream
that I adore
my one desire
to love you more
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rob kistner © 2011
November 20th, 2011 at 2:12 pm
blissfully romantic words
November 20th, 2011 at 3:27 pm
Nice cadence and controlled rhyme.
November 20th, 2011 at 4:39 pm
i love it… esp the last verse….
JJRod’z
November 20th, 2011 at 4:41 pm
Romantic loveliness…
November 20th, 2011 at 9:02 pm
sweet.
November 20th, 2011 at 11:48 pm
An excellent love poem!!
November 21st, 2011 at 11:03 am
this has a nice gentle rhyme to it that accentuates the love felt through your words rob…nicely done that…and sensual too dipping into that floral nectar…
November 21st, 2011 at 11:08 am
So beautiful……..
November 21st, 2011 at 1:23 pm
You had us at /taste the
nectar/–this one really
stands out from a lot of
your other poems; old
fashioned, formal, and
as sweet as drippings
from a honey pot.
November 21st, 2011 at 2:45 pm
Firing souls? Mmm smoldering words…
November 22nd, 2011 at 10:11 am
to fire your soul
in passion’s bliss
you got me at this line! Brilliant, passionate, so hot hot hot! Phew!
November 22nd, 2011 at 2:20 pm
Lovely and soooo romantic.
November 22nd, 2011 at 5:26 pm
Filled with passion. Love it!
November 22nd, 2011 at 5:40 pm
A lyrical piece that somehow reminded of Dowland. Should be set to music!
November 23rd, 2011 at 9:04 am
I love a bit of romance!
November 23rd, 2011 at 10:36 am
hmm…beautiful and gentle lovesong..
November 26th, 2011 at 5:10 pm
nice rhythm and rhyme