Bliss

 

Bliss

let us dare
sweet lust’s advance
to intertwine
in love’s enhance

I burn to offer
love’s special kiss
to fire your soul
in passion’s bliss

to enfold you deep
in nocturne’s hour
to taste the nectar
of your tender flower

you are the dream
that I adore
my one desire
to love you more

• • •

rob kistner © 2011

linked at Magpie Tales

17 Responses to “Bliss”

  1. christine Says:

    blissfully romantic words

  2. Maureen Says:

    Nice cadence and controlled rhyme.

  3. JJ Roa Rodriguez Says:

    i love it… esp the last verse….

    JJRod’z

  4. Tess Kincaid Says:

    Romantic loveliness…

  5. Morning Says:

    sweet.

  6. Mohana Says:

    An excellent love poem!!

  7. brian miller Says:

    this has a nice gentle rhyme to it that accentuates the love felt through your words rob…nicely done that…and sensual too dipping into that floral nectar…

  8. Mimi Foxmorton Says:

    So beautiful……..
    :)

  9. Glenn Buttkus Says:

    You had us at /taste the
    nectar/–this one really
    stands out from a lot of
    your other poems; old
    fashioned, formal, and
    as sweet as drippings
    from a honey pot.

  10. Caddoc Trellis Says:

    Firing souls? Mmm smoldering words…

  11. Jane Jones Says:

    to fire your soul
    in passion’s bliss

    you got me at this line! Brilliant, passionate, so hot hot hot! Phew!

  12. Doctor FTSE Says:

    Lovely and soooo romantic.

  13. keiths ramblings Says:

    Filled with passion. Love it!

  14. Nicholas V Says:

    A lyrical piece that somehow reminded of Dowland. Should be set to music!

  15. Jinksy Says:

    I love a bit of romance!

  16. Claudia Says:

    hmm…beautiful and gentle lovesong..

  17. zongrik Says:

    nice rhythm and rhyme

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