Twenty Years

Written for my wife on our anniversary.

Twenty years

(haiku)

Twenty years today

when our spirits awakened

love now deep and rich

Rob Kistner © 05/06/07

13 Responses to “Twenty Years”

  1. staceyR Says:

    congrats, Rob!
    40s go with haiku. That’s what I say.
    Like your chairs.

  2. A.E. Roman Says:

    Sweet. The world needs more love poems. Great stuff here. Love that Zen wine cabinet. Any wino would be proud to have that in their home. Sad about your son. So sorry. No real words for that…

  3. Rob Kistner Says:

    Thank you Stacey!

    I agree. :)

    Someday my chairs will have “legs”, and walk into peoples homes — if I’m fortunate.

  4. Rob Kistner Says:

    To quote Dusty Springfield, “What the world needs now is love…”

    Thank you Alex!

    I hope, in the not too distant future, there will be a Zen in every wino’s home — the ones that can afford it, of course. :)

    Yes, so very sad about my son, but my love for his is quite alive.

  5. Writer Bug Says:

    How beautiful! I hope I can one day use your haiku on my 40th anniversary. :) Congrats!

  6. Rob Kistner Says:

    With my blessings Bug!

    Thank you for the kind words.

  7. blondie Says:

    A sweet poem for your love. :)

    Thanks for your kind thoughts and comment on my firt haiku in many years.

  8. Rob Kistner Says:

    I have a sweet love! :)

    You are welcome Blondie, and thank you for stopping by again.

  9. Mimi Lenox Says:

    Lovely.

    Happy Anniversary and many many more.

  10. Rob Kistner Says:

    Thank you Mimi! :)

  11. Tiffany Says:

    Happy Anniversary and such a beautiful haiku! Twenty years is a great accomplishment! May you have many more! Thanks for stopping by my blog. You’ve got some wonderful poetry here.
    Cheers,
    Tiffany
    (Poetmama)

  12. Rob Kistner Says:

    Thank you Tiffany!

    They say the first twenty are the most difficult, but I’ve enjoyed every minute — and my wife is a patient woman. :)

  13. Clare Says:

    Beautiful! — the feeling of this haiku is deep and rich, like in the last line. Congratulations to both of you!

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