Joy Dims
Posted by Rob Kistner | Filed under Free Verse, Poetry, love story
Joy Dims
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scarring my soul
memory cuts deep
with unbearable pain
joy dims
in this sunset of passion
as my spirit darkens
here then gone
love’s fading apparition
now sorrow’s afterimage
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rob kistner © 2009
…inspired by a prompt at Saturday Scribes
March 7th, 2009 at 1:11 pm
Rob,
Your poem, very much like flickering embers . . .
sad and reflective . . . is beautiful.
March 25th, 2009 at 4:27 pm
there’s a lot of meaning in this short poem — it’s true that love can fade like an apparition, but sadness too becomes an afterimage. “Afterimage” is a great word: in the eye the afterimage fades, but you can brighten it momentarily with an intentional twitch, but less and less each time. so too with memories; we scratch at them like old wounds, but eventually they’re only the memory of a memory, with less and less power. i love the ability of choosing the exact right word to carry so much meaning — to me that’s what poetry is about.