Mute

Posted by Rob Kistner | Filed under Poetry

MUTE

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sparse conversation

then no words remain

we part

I channel surf

you read

the silence screams

our love is mute

…

Rob Kistner © 2007

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MUTE

(haiku)

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Sparse conversation

We part, no further words spent

Our love has gone mute

…

Rob Kistner © 2007

Permalink | Comments (2) | Apr 18, 2007

2 Responses to “Mute”

  1. Matthew Robertson Says:
    April 22nd, 2007 at 6:29 am

    Amazing how few words it takes to conjure such a powerful image! Your words remind me of the song by Big Head Todd and the Monsters entitled “Bittersweet”. Worth a listen if you get the chance.

    Cheers

  2. Rob Kistner Says:
    April 22nd, 2007 at 11:29 am

    I am pleased you felt the power Matthew. It was a very emotional write for me.

    if they have it on iTunes, I will check out the song you referenced.

    Thank you for stopping by to visit!

    –and so it goes–
    …Rob

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