…this is a love poem, that is also a yearning for honesty, in the face of our fundamental human tendency toward insecurity and fear…
photorendering entitled: “Liberated”
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see you naked
naked — backlit by the sun
naked — in a mountain meadow
naked — running in the rain
naked — in a flower garden
naked — lying in the surf
naked — walking in a forest deep
naked — smiling on an autumn morn
naked — in a peaceful sleep
naked — in a redrock desert
naked — by a waterfall
naked — in a gentle breeze
naked — on a silvered night
silhouette ‘gainst a sterling moon
naked — folded in my arms
with your heart and soul laid bare
all your dreams and fears exposed
every pretense stripped away
…naked
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rob kistner © 2010
Lovely. Is this for Sunday Scribblings, Message prompt? Anyway, I’m glad that I came across it. Absolutely beautiful.
Very strong, and the Naked repetition works so well
Gorgeous. I share your yearning for honesty among so much insecurity and fear.
powerful and vivid.
Nice. A photographer’s poem?
Using the word “naked” over and over changed the meaning for me, instead of “unclothed” it became “open and honest”. Very nice, indeed…
So powerful! I really like your style.
Each repetition of “naked” changed its meaaning, indeed, changed its image – leading to the inexpressedly tender endling. Lovely.
naked is wonderful Rob…thanks for sharing your words
I am completely with Cynthia Short.
I really enjoyed this; thanks for sharing it.
sexy, sexy, wow! I really like it!
Pamela