NaPoWriMo #27

This is my twenty-seventh post for National Poetry Month 2010
one acrostic
one tanka



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• inspired by Carolee Sherwood ’s day 27 prompt at read write poem to write an acrostic

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Evolution

Even in chaos nature finds balance.

Violent floods beget fertile fields.

One thing ends, another begins.

Life is a cycle of birth and death.

Untamed wildfire creates forest ash.

The ashen remains nurture growth again.

In the caterpillar lives the butterfly.

One thing ends, another begins.

Now and forever, the mandella spins.

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Stone Fox First

garage sound check great

groupies at the ludlow door

allmans soon to start

damned duane is still m-i-a

we stone fox boys are ready

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acrostic and tanka by: rob kistner © 2010

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…check out who’s gettin’ acrostic at readwritepoem

10 Responses to “NaPoWriMo #27”

  1. Stan Ski Says:

    What goes around…
    I can neither play an instrument nor sing - always envied those who could; espicially those who wrote and played their own.

  2. Joanne Johns Says:

    That’s a very tidy acrostic you’ve got there! Nice work :)

  3. Dan Rako Says:

    The wheel stops for no man.

  4. Mojo Says:

    They’re still backstage trying to sober Dwayne up ;)

    Do love the process of Evolution as you describe it. Marvelous. Each thing in its season.

  5. Maureen Says:

    Nice acrostic. It doesn’t seem forced, as some acrostics are, and I like how you’ve sustained the subject matter.

  6. vivienne blake Says:

    Great acrostic. I didn’t ‘get’ the Tanka - garage is not my scene.

  7. Rob Kistner Says:

    Yo’ ViV -

    The Ludlow Garage scene was one hip happenin’. This is where the sound system from Woodstock took up residence, and where my band, Stone Fox, was the opening act for groups like the Allman Brothers. Their lead guitar player Duane Allman, was incredible — and a notorious flake. Duane, not Eric Clapton, did the glorious ascending guitar licks on the Derek and the Dominos great song, Layla. He died tragically crashing a motorcycle under the influence — of something?

    Now you ‘got’ it Viv… ;)

    …rob

  8. J. D. Mackenzie Says:

    Rob, all I need to abandon creationism. Well written, an almost religious feel to it.

  9. pamela Says:

    Two excellent poems!
    Pamela

  10. wayne Says:

    dam you opened for th A Bros…wow…good one….so your poems….thanks for sharing this Rob

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