I admire the internal rhymes and alliterations of this free verse. It is a poem that is best appreciated when read aloud. Thank you for sharing it. Reply
It’s great to hear the voice of that poem. So many lines and images that caught my attention, but the one that hit my heart was “the sorrowing hour”. I’ve been there many nights. Well done! Reply
“negative a day”…. oooo! The shivers! 😉
oops – that’s negative OF day – sigh.. my nocturne is still in my eyes this morn… 😉
I admire the internal rhymes and alliterations of this free verse. It is a poem that is best appreciated when read aloud. Thank you for sharing it.
It’s great to hear the voice of that poem. So many lines and images that caught my attention, but the one that hit my heart was “the sorrowing hour”. I’ve been there many nights. Well done!
awakened to the power of verbal poetry..