Open window (reprise)
Posted by Rob Kistner | Filed under Poetry
Night Breeze
•
briskly clean
silky cool
it spills in
the open window
slips satin silver
sly and sensuous
sheer and silent
as the moon
wafts and tumbles
tantalizes
floats and swoops
in sweet refresh
dances gently
up your arms
across your chest
to brush your cheek
wraps itself
soft upon you
in soothing
fond embrace
whispered rushes
fluttered breaths
like loving strokes
caress your skin
lilting tender
breath of comfort
zephyred fingers
toss your hair
from heated torment
with crisp compassion
this night breeze
delivers true
…
rob kistner © 2007
September 1st, 2007 at 4:28 pm
Beautiful poem, Rob. I’ve sat here smiling to myself the whole time I’ve been reading your poems - thank you! I must visit you more often - I especially enjoyed your Haiku too. I don’t think I’d know where to begin on that!
September 2nd, 2007 at 5:55 am
Yeah, I’ll just say “ditto” and point upwards.
What she said.
September 3rd, 2007 at 2:30 pm
This is so beautiful, Rob. I just love the rhythm of your words. They flow like a breeze, as they fill your mind with it’s imagry.Also your brakes are divine. You are some poet!
Sorry this is so late but blogger would not let me comment.
I am really fed up.
Keep writing ans see you on your blog.
love-bd-Melanie
September 11th, 2007 at 12:31 pm
Your poetry moves beautifully, a joy to read
September 24th, 2007 at 11:39 am
English Mum -
Thank you!
I’m pleased you enjoyed your visit — please come again…
October 4th, 2007 at 4:24 am
Your poetry is always so explicit and descriptive. I can picture what you write. It amazes me that poetry can make ‘feel’. Your writing does that for me.
October 5th, 2007 at 8:08 am
Jennifer -
I’m pleased my imagery works for you…
I love to create imagery!