Song of Love

This is my second post for the Sunday Scribblings May 13th prompt: “Second Chance”. This is me asking for a second chance after my thoughtlessness.

Author’s note: This next short piece was written as an apology to my wife for one of the times I opended my mouth instead of my ears, and more importantly, my heart.

SONG OF LOVE

Sometimes, In the clatter of a thoughtless moment,

I forget to listen.

I fail to hear the tender lilt of our heartsong.

But when I am quiet and we are close,

this lyric of love is all I hear.

Please forgive my selfish noise.

Rejoin me in our sweet duet.

I miss your gentle voice.

Rob Kistner © 4/3/99

10 Responses to “Song of Love”

  1. Sara Says:

    Please forgive my selfish noise

    Love that line! So lyrical it could be in a song.

  2. Rob Kistner Says:

    Thank you Sara! Thank you as well for visiting my site.

    –and so it goes–
    …Rob

  3. Maria Lourdes Says:

    hi
    lucky girl that inspired you to write that one…you are a writer by heart…all the best..

    maria lourdes

  4. Rob Kistner Says:

    It’s a lucky man who has such a woman in his life.

    Thank you Maria! All the very best to you.

    –and so it goes–
    …Rob

  5. awareness Says:

    beautiful………it tells me you are aware of yourself and how others percieve you…..

    I look forward to reading more

  6. Rob Kistner Says:

    Awareness -

    We all put our foot in it sometimes. A little sweetness in an apology does wonders for the aftertaste. :)

    Thank you!

  7. Spacedlaw Says:

    I do hope she forgave you… :)

  8. Rob Kistner Says:

    Many times over! :)

  9. Soulless Says:

    Perfect for guitar or violin, for soul-calming string music. ^_^

  10. Rob Kistner Says:

    Soulless -

    This piece certainly rings lyrical in my heart! I’d love to hear it put to music.

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