Spellbound

…this piece is in response to the 15th prompt of 2010 on Writer’s Island
and further inspired by prompt #14 at We Write Poems…






Spellbound


poet
you are enigma

darkness and shadow
you veil and shroud

fire and light
you incandesce

torch my essence
burn deep my soul
trouble my spirit
unsettle my being

ignite my wonder

whet my seeker’s vessel
with need
to be filled full

at once familiar
yet
exotically foreign
wonderfully strange

wrongly boxed but
exquisitely wrapped

in angst
indignation
longing
discovery
loss
love

with all these
and infinitely more

you reach an empty place
deep within
echoing my past
awakening my myths

exposing
that which I embrace
in the moment
as truth

stirring my pain
my anger
my loneliness

my hope

offering just enough answer
that I combust with question
sacred uncertainty

I’m held
suspended in inquiry
in memories of neverwas

enrapt by your careful words
transfixed by mystery
elevated by insight
impaled by vision

spellbound

• • •

rob kistner © 2010

• photo by Fotolia

20 Responses to “Spellbound”

  1. Nara Malone Says:

    This one left me spellbound. It’s magical :)

  2. Stan Ski Says:

    …’infinitely more’ is right - but you covered the main points that explain the attraction, fascination and wonder of the creative process.

  3. Rob Kistner Says:

    Thank you Nara…

    …rob

  4. Rob Kistner Says:

    It’s a magical thing Stan…

    …rob

  5. gautami tripathy Says:

    Like the mysticism here…

    half-way through

  6. Rob Kistner Says:

    Thank you Gautami…

    …rob

  7. Mary Says:

    You have said a lot about both the creative process and reading a piece of created work! Spellbinding!

  8. Elizabeth Says:

    Lists within lists, yet focused and direct. The Creative process is worth a life time of exploration.

    Elizabeth

  9. brenda w Says:

    Oh Rob, this is gorgeous. I felt every word deep within. Bravo!
    ~Brenda

  10. Rob Kistner Says:

    Thank you Mary…

    …rob

  11. Rob Kistner Says:

    Worth many lifetimes ElizaBeth…

    …rob

  12. Rob Kistner Says:

    Thank you very much Brenda, your words are gratifying…

    …rob

  13. vivienne blake Says:

    This chimes with my own feelings about creativity. I particularly liked the stanza:

    “enrapt by your careful words
    transfixed by mystery
    elevated by insight
    impaled by vision”

    ViV

  14. Rob Kistner Says:

    Creative minds think alike Viv… ;)

    …rob

  15. Paul Oakley Says:

    Nice, Rob! I particularly like the encapsulization of these lines:

    at once familiar
    yet
    exotically foreign
    wonderfully strange

    Very much the task of the artist, that, to take the familiar and defamiliarize it, to take the unfamiliar and make it like smooth, well-worn leather.

  16. Rob Kistner Says:

    Thank you Paul, I appreciate your kind words…

    …rob

  17. irene Says:

    I also combust Rob reading your spellbound words.

  18. Neil Reid Says:

    Gosh Rob, it’s busy inside the poet-you. Maybe I’m glad I’m too simple minded for all of that! :)

    Love the lines, “wrongly boxed but / exquisitely wrapped”. Made me smile!

  19. Rob Kistner Says:

    Thank you Irene…

    …rob

  20. Rob Kistner Says:

    Neil, it is far too “busy” inside my head — but I have learned to live with it… my wife might argue the point of how effectively I do or do not cope… ;)
    …rob

Leave a Reply