Succulent
Posted by Rob Kistner | Filed under Image, Poetry
Succulent
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succulent nectar of plumping fruit
peeled back in promised sweet delight
laid bare engorged deliciousness
a vision of tender ecstasy
tart sweet tingle at tip of tongue
probing to lift the fleshy folds
as lips embrace the juicy pulp
teeth gently nip the bursting core
breathing in the rich bouquet
all senses teased and tantalized
my mouth devours the dripping treat
again and again until satisfied
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rob kistner © 2008
October 31st, 2008 at 12:17 am
Succulent indeed! On many levels…lovely!
Alisa
October 31st, 2008 at 6:36 am
Alisa -
I’m pleased you enjoyed this bit of fruit…
…rob
October 31st, 2008 at 6:45 am
yes, yes, YES!!! Oh sorry…
Guess it really is good if it makes your mouth water?
October 31st, 2008 at 11:18 am
that was wonderful rob… sticky subject matter handled like a pro!!!!
October 31st, 2008 at 12:42 pm
Jorc -
Hope it was good for you…
…rob
October 31st, 2008 at 12:43 pm
Hi Paisley -
Thank you — that was so sweet…
…rob
October 31st, 2008 at 1:28 pm
i feel the need for a cigarette….oh, how deliciously done….
October 31st, 2008 at 9:30 pm
The post, layout , blog..Iam in love with all. Shall visit again and read in peace….
October 31st, 2008 at 9:53 pm
hmmm - I am smoking a cigarette!
November 1st, 2008 at 11:29 am
I love this piece! Very succulent and edible!! I love the photo too! Thank you so much for sharing as I am such a fruit lover!!
Thank you so much for stopping by my poetry LJ!
November 2nd, 2008 at 4:23 am
Deliciously vivid and descriptive. A delightful poem!
November 2nd, 2008 at 12:21 pm
O. M. G. !!! Now this is indecent. Definitely scandalous! And definitely delicious!