Succulent
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succulent nectar of plumping fruit
peeled back in promised sweet delight
laid bare engorged deliciousness
a vision of tender ecstasy
tart sweet tingle at tip of tongue
probing to lift the fleshy folds
as lips embrace the juicy pulp
teeth gently nip the bursting core
breathing in the rich bouquet
all senses teased and tantalized
my mouth devours the dripping treat
again and again until satisfied
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rob kistner © 2008
Succulent indeed! On many levels…lovely!
Alisa
Alisa –
I’m pleased you enjoyed this bit of fruit… 😉
…rob
yes, yes, YES!!! Oh sorry… 😉
Guess it really is good if it makes your mouth water?
that was wonderful rob… sticky subject matter handled like a pro!!!!
Jorc –
Hope it was good for you… 😉
…rob
Hi Paisley –
Thank you — that was so sweet… 😉
…rob
i feel the need for a cigarette….oh, how deliciously done….
The post, layout , blog..Iam in love with all. Shall visit again and read in peace….
hmmm – I am smoking a cigarette!
I love this piece! Very succulent and edible!! I love the photo too! Thank you so much for sharing as I am such a fruit lover!! 🙂
Thank you so much for stopping by my poetry LJ!
Deliciously vivid and descriptive. A delightful poem!
O. M. G. !!! Now this is indecent. Definitely scandalous! And definitely delicious!