The Ache!

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“Heartache” by: Jaime Best

 

The Ache!

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there is a darkness
of the broken soul
so deep
it stirs the tongue
of the brooding poet
loosing a torrent of sorrow
so rich with longing
the hearts of all who read
will ache
for their one true love
lost forever
to fate

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rob kistner © 2019


 

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  • 40 thoughts on “The Ache!”

    1. No one’s ache is the same. Each one is sacred. The release through writing can offer some healing…and for the reader, can touch our hearts. For some, it resonates with their own unique pain and loss. A beautiful rendering, Rob. Thanks for sharing.

    2. All aces, brother. A rich utilization of 44 choice words. Let’s hear it for the brooding poets of this planet. Many of our parents and grandparents, spouses and some children are dead. The red lipstick stain of death never fades. Alas, a lost love, a broken heart, can be healed by scar tissue.

    3. This is a beautiful write. One’s grief sometimes can only touch another through through their poems. And still there will be those that never understand.

    4. A sorrowful quadrille, Rob, that is deeply touching. It resonates even more with me today because we lost my father-in-law to cancer in the early hours of this morning.

    5. Ah the richness of words in the hands of a poet (professional or home grown)….and sometimes in the hands of a child. The words that reach out and draw us in….that evoke feeling.
      So well written here.

    6. “a darkness
      of the broken soul
      so deep
      it stirs the tongue
      of the brooding poet.”
      Great lines.
      So tragic and true, the loss of a love.

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