Fertile Moon Vote = Voice — Speak Up! Fertile Moon ~ stalks lie down in fields arbors ache ‘neath harvest moon fall is on the land ~ ~ ~ rob kistner © 2020 To read more at Haiku Challenge: CLICK HERE
Rob, I just re-read this. Are the arbors aching because they are heavy with grapes? I love that line! Reply
Life does seem to lie down in autumn, but it’s an essential part of the cycle. It’s my favorite season. Reply
Love that last line. A nice one.
Pat
Thank you Pat!
Beautiful Haiku Rob. Strong image of a Fall night
Thank you Christine… 🙂
Rob, I really like seeing you at Frank’s Haikai Challenge! Beautiful haiku.
Thank you Lisa. Haiku’s, Tanka’s and the like are fun, and stimulating to construct… 🙂
Rob, I just re-read this. Are the arbors aching because they are heavy with grapes? I love that line!
Yes, exactly! Cool Lisa… 🙂
Life does seem to lie down in autumn, but it’s an essential part of the cycle. It’s my favorite season.
Mine as well Ken. It suits my melancholy temperament.