”I can’t see the end of me” by: Oladios
I fear
I have lost my heart
and along with it
a larger part
if I do not panic
but stay calm
instead
being careful
not to lose my head
if I can
look to the future
avoid the dread
it’s not hard to conceive
kitty I truly believe
though parts of me
have certainly
lost a bit
of fleshy tether
eventually
with what’s left
of me
I can finally
pull myself together
rob kistner © 2019
I love it! I can so see the thoughts here in the image Rob! I love the wonderful rhyme in it too! It made me smile ear to ear! It is wonderful with a mix of noir and humor, that takes some talent to pull off! :-))
Thank you Carrie. I approached it piece by piece, constructing and reconstructing, until it all fit together — properly… 😉
Love this! The tripping rhythm, the way it comes to a close, it all works together so well.
Thank you Chrissa! I enjoyed putting this together… 😉
You have really captured a message in this one Rob. Hold on to that dear heart of yours it has so much yet to feel, touch and see.
Thank you True, and I certainly intend to do so — long as I possibly can…
A powerful write of personal triumph. Hopeful!
Thank you Vivian! I was feeling a little scattered when I wrote it… 😉
Oh, you brought this image to live, spoke the perfect voice for it. Love love love this!
Thank you Susie…! 🙂
I guess we are all on a search for wholeness after all. Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing
At times more than others!
Love this, Rob. It has a nice rhythm to it while also sounding Wonderland-ish.