~
ride the moon
in the sorcerer’s craft
to the secret place of dreams
ride the moon
to seek the magic
that sparkles there
like stardust
in the folds of time
~ ~ ~
rob kistner © 2018
Moonrider
~
ride the moon
in the sorcerer’s craft
to the secret place of dreams
ride the moon
to seek the magic
that sparkles there
like stardust
in the folds of time
~ ~ ~
rob kistner © 2018
Fantastic, a blend of the classical triolet form, and the modern line – it comes together so well here with your theme. Bravo!
nice rob…i like your variation…like stardust in the folds of time, really like that line…
Rob, I love this, it is magical, I want to ride!
Yes. We’re all being pulled by the moon and tides today. I love your fantastical triolet. Well done.
Dreamy. It’s so good to see you posting p[oetry again regularly
I too, hang out in the
/secret place of dreams/
great mastery of the form,
And nice poetic ride!
Nice adaptation of the form
I haven’t tried the triolet. This makes me want to. I, too, like the “stardust in the folds of time”.
Dreamily beautiful, Rob. As it is now 3:42 a.m. and I am turning off the computer for some sleep, your triolet is the perfect ending to my day-turnednight-turnedmorning. Thank you.