Seasons

 

Author’s note: This is a suite of four haiku that reflect the seasons of the year.

 

Seasons

 

Spring

(haiku)

wings flutter gently

spring breeze bends full flowered stems

meadow dance begins

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Summer

(haiku)

green leaf on blue pond

turns in golden summer sun

red bird softly sings

• • •

 

Fall

(haiku)

stalks lie down in fields

arbors burst with ripened grape

fall is on the land

• • •

 

Winter

(haiku)

coarse lands cloaked in white

lakes bejeweled in crystal

winter’s dressing hand

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rob kistner © 2007

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collage above entitled: “Four Seasons”
created by: rob kistner © 2007
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10 Responses to “Seasons”

  1. Rose Dewy Knickers Says:

    Beautiful expressions of the seasons. I like the winter one the best.

    Rose

    xo

  2. Rob Kistner Says:

    Rose -

    Thank you for your kind words.

  3. rax Says:

    i love the fall one. the stalks lying down is a hauntingly beautiful vision

  4. Rob Kistner Says:

    Rax -

    Thank you!

    I have always found Fall to be an enchanted time of the year — my favorite season.

  5. Lime & Tequila Says:

    Your web sites are rich. I enjoyed thinking of a suite of Haiku, which on opening, unleashes the seasons. To me, Winter is the gem of this quartet. But all were enjoyed.

    Peace,

    L&T

  6. Rob Kistner Says:

    L&T -

    Thank you… ;)

    I’m pleased you found this suite enjoyable!

  7. Linda Jacobs Says:

    Beautiful collage to match the poems!

  8. Rob Kistner Says:

    Linda -

    Thank you… I’m pleased you enjoyed it. ;)

    I thoroughly enjoy creating a collage to visually tell the story of the poem it accompanies. I always try to capture a coherent theme in each collage.

  9. Crafty green poet Says:

    Hi Rob
    Thanks for linking to these in Read Write POem. I like the summer one best and the collage is wonderful!

  10. Rob Kistner Says:

    You are most welcome Juliet. Thank you for stopping by, and for your kind words.

    “Seasons” is an archived piece I’d written which I enjoyed sharing under the topic here. Besides each of the four seasonal haiku being in strict 5/7/5, “Summer” also incorporates the most elements found in more traditional haiku: • a season, • a natural object (leaf), • a living creature (bird), • an action (turning/singing), • and color (green, blue, gold, and red).

    I really like the direction in which the new RWP is heading. Thank you for being a proactive part of this growth…

    …rob

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