Bad Weather
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you blew in like a typhoon
a hurricane of love
your kisses hot as lightning
striking from above
your passion was a tempest
I was swept up in its force
but now the winds have died
this storm has run its course
my thoughts are grey and cloudy
my eyes are steady rain
my heart’s caught in a cold front
bad weather’s bringing pain
yes, the warm winds will return
as will the clear blue skies
but my frozen heart will ever yearn
for the sun-fire of your eyes
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rob kistner © 2008
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collage above entitled: “Bad Weather” – by: rob kistner © 2008
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Bravo! Like this a lot.
Best kind of storm to be caught in!
😀
a perfect ending?
Relationships are so often a storm. Sometimes, this is best.
I love this!
Great pic
I think we’ve all been caught in this kind of storm.
Love it Rob! Passionate, yet forlorn….
great collage and of course loved the poem. well-placed metaphor here
Love the pace of this and the way it rhymes and the image ‘a hurricane of love.’
Oh, Rob, this just sings! Your rhythm is right on and the rhyme is so natural. LOVE the collage and those haunting eyes!
this was great, very nice rhythm.
Love this Rob! Beautiful images and metaphors! 😀 I’m visiting from “One single Impression.” 😀
“but my frozen heart will ever yearn
for the sun-fire of your eyes”
lovely way to say this