Running Out
Posted by Rob Kistner | Filed under Free Verse, Poetry, dark, horror, love, tragedy
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he runs his fingers through her hair
tears run down his cheeks
he holds her near
cradled
too late protected
he runs the events
over and over in his mind
the horrible events
daisey
our golden lab
running out into the street
you running out after
right into the path
run down
why
why
why did you run
now time
and your precious life
running out
running out
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rob kistner © 2010





















March 2nd, 2010 at 7:23 pm
No. It’s a beautiful poem. Truly. But it is so sad I can’t stand it.
March 2nd, 2010 at 8:47 pm
It happens, sadly, all too often.
March 3rd, 2010 at 12:13 pm
Nice verse detailing a terrible event. Senseless loss is never easy.
March 4th, 2010 at 3:03 am
Moving write…loved your two different takes on the prompt…
March 4th, 2010 at 7:49 am
Nice!!! Sad, but so true!
March 5th, 2010 at 4:17 am
Dramatic play on the word “run” with all its possible interpretations worked together! A very moving and clever write!