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thoughts drift by gently
my mood is mellow this day
I linger at rest
dreaming of the spring breezes
that tickle my soul to life
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rob kistner © 2011
use ‘mellow’, ‘breeze’, and ‘tickle’ in a poem…
Soul Breeze
use ‘mellow’, ‘breeze’, and ‘tickle’ in a poem…
Nice tanka, Rob.
This Tanka wastes nothing, leaves nothing out. Well done. Here’s my 3WW piece:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/16/lucky-to-call-you-friend/
Lovely poetry .I love the last lines “spring breezes that that tickle my soul to life”
Well done!
Looking forward to that soul breeze myself.
What a dreamy breath of life…a tickle indeed..Jae
Gently beautiful.
Amen to that 🙂
Hey, nicely done, and fun too 🙂
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